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for Wherefore Art Thou, Chase?

by PiretteRose666

person TwentyTwo
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Pirette!!
This story is wonderful, I felt I was watching a movie ;D

I disagree with the one who could do without Erin and Huey. I couldn\'t, because their relationship add more depth to the story.
I even find myself wondering about Lily\'s life and thoughts.
A story with several (romantic) plots is boring when the author isn\'t good at juggling with the diffenrent substories.
You ARE good at it, very very good, and had me hooked (is Lily a nun, what happened in Erin\'s past, whose eyes are in the bushes, what does Seamus do for a living...so much questions lol)

Keep it up
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely fantastic fic. I can\'t get enough of it. Please please update soon. I enjoy this story immensely. Great work
person steve
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic... eagerly waiting for more.
person Laura
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Saw your story recomended on Eon\'s page and couldn\'t help but read it. I love it! Please keep the updates comming. Erin\'s past has me intrigued as well as the eyes in the bushes and Chase\'s faulty memory.
person Taylor
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the Janelle/Chase interaction. Could do without the Erin/Huey stuff, though. Half of some of the chapters are about Erin and Huey, when really the summary and title suggest it\'s about Janelle and Chase. This story is good with just one romantic plot.
person flower
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good, i am liking it a lot. keep up the good work
person blue_berry
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sooo good! Cant wait for the next one.

Although I have to disagree with whoever wrote that he could do without the Huey/Erin interaction. I actually think their characters are more complex and their relationship are very interesting.

Keep em coming... :)

person anon.
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying your story.
person Crecy
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I Love that last paragraph. Heh heh, trying to convince them they\'re gay... PLEASE update soon!
person Crecy
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY kute! Luv the way it was written and like the ideas. PLEASE update soon!