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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I\'m supposed to be studying for my last lab practical and can\'t seem to tear myself away from my computer. Your characters are so complex. I love how they don\'t change over night. I relate so much to them. I can\'t wait to see what happens!
<3Lynn
<3Lynn
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great long waited for chapter!!!
Just have one question though!
How come Chase doesn\'t remember Janelle?? I don\'t understand O_o in the prologue or first chapter or whatever, you said that janelle was his deepest secret and so and so....so WHY won\'t he remember her??? >_____> or i just miss something i dunno
I still love this story very much, they\'re sooo cute ^O^
see ya!!
Just have one question though!
How come Chase doesn\'t remember Janelle?? I don\'t understand O_o in the prologue or first chapter or whatever, you said that janelle was his deepest secret and so and so....so WHY won\'t he remember her??? >_____> or i just miss something i dunno
I still love this story very much, they\'re sooo cute ^O^
see ya!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story, I hope you continue it. Look forward to reading more!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is such a great story! I hope you continue it soon!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh damn it! not a Cliffhanger!!!! Erin and Huey are so cute! Ohh and finally Chase and Janelle get it on-sort of... :) The one thing I\'m not sure about is the side story about the latin kids, I still dont see where that\'s going or how it impacts the character\'s life. ** looks confused** Anyway, hope you post more soon! Love the story so far!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh and \'Anon\' I dont think this can be considered theft. Eon is aware of this story. the way I see it, you learn from those who you look up to, and litle by litle you refine your style and learn what works best... which is what PiretteRose666 is doing, I think.... The story is awsome... this compared to 70% of the stories in any erotica site is excellent writing...
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOo.... That last part caught my eye. Whoose jelouse of Erin and her boyfriend? LUV IT!! PLEASE update soon!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t help but notice that there are a lot of similarities between this and the works of Eon, who you seem to be a fan of. Maybe you should try harder not to sound like her, since she doesn\'t take too kindly to creative theft.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw aw aw! Why is it when everything seem to go well, trouble happens?
Because I sense trouble coming big time for your characters PR ;D
Very very good chapter, I can still feel the taste of choco-maple on my tongue (and I won\'t talk about Chase\'s taste ^O^), and I\'m worrying about Erin.
I stay tuned for the next one!!
Because I sense trouble coming big time for your characters PR ;D
Very very good chapter, I can still feel the taste of choco-maple on my tongue (and I won\'t talk about Chase\'s taste ^O^), and I\'m worrying about Erin.
I stay tuned for the next one!!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i am so glad eon posted it on her page so that i could read your stories. they are wonderful