rate_review Reviews

Well done with ch 13, PiretteRose.
Some time ago I downloaded the story a edited it together, to read at ease, and found it remarkably well written for a first try.
Keep it up please and thank you.
If you want it back proof-read, mail me, as I would be glad to oblige.
The work merits proof-reading, spell check and if needed the touch of an editor not the author.

Yours

John
from Hungary

Very good! Can\'t wait for more =)

I loved the lastest chapter, and am so glad you decided to continue! I do agree that you are such a tease and a little mean. After all the waiting, the build-up, they\'re finally going to do something and you END it on a cliffhanger! You can make it up to us by continuing SOON! Seriously, I am enjoying your story very much! I love the Erin/Huey hook-up and can\'t wait to see what happens next, particularly the unveiling of her secret to Huey and his attacker getting what coming to him! I don\'t get what the deal is w/Chase, same name, same hometown, WHEN is he going to get a clue! I also hope you get Seamus & Lily together and look forward to what you write next. Hopefully, soon!

Wow! such a lot in one chapter. You have great style, I feel myself slipping into your story easily each time. Whenever you describe Chase and Janelle together, I get shivers.

I am SO GLAD you have continued this story! That being said, curses on you! That was the meanest cliffhanger ever! But Janelle and Chase are great characters, and I love where how this story has gone so far, and where it seems to be going. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

such a tease... just what we\'ve been waiting for the entire story... and you leave a cliffhanger. so not fair. lol. ok, well, its awesome, and i definitely cant wait til janelle finds out who chase really is. oh, and of course the continuation of what is about to happen in his room. lol. well, update soon!

Woohoo! Another chapter! Janelle just needs to come clean with chase and poor huey! Mean people suck ya know! anywho thanks for the update and kep em comming!

thats messed up. i hope those guys get whatss comin for them. please update soon!!

Oh, very good story! You can\'t keep us hanging too long though, Janelle\'s got to tell Chase sometime about knowing him \'before\'. And what about Lily? Could she hook-up with Seamus? And I hope Huey isn\'t hurt too badly by those stupid football assholes. Maybe he\'s a third-degree black belt or something (I have known a big geek like him to be such). This is a great story, very entertaining, great character development. I just wish that Janelle wasn\'t so wishy-washy with Chase. I mean, poor guy, he\'s been chasing this girl for nearly five months(?) and she\'s been pulling all sorts of bipolar crap and mixed signals at him (her stunt at the Halloween party was childish and unwarranted, I thought). Chase should be rewarded sometime for his efforts and patience; perhaps by the Christmas present every guy wishes for? Keep plugging though, this is one story on here that is really worth pursuing.

You always end your chapters in on the edge so I can\'t stop reading. Now I have no more chapters to read! Guess i better start studying. Can\'t wait for the next one!!

<3Lynn