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for hey jude

by iris27

person Jade Tokier
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could be a little better written. Nothing that a good beta wouldn\'t cure.
person DPuppy
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a Japanese freak too. I know very little (Mostly phrases and short words). I also had a friend that was mexican and spoke japanese, although he wasn\'t gay. I like your story. It\'s nice and yeah the chapts are short but mine (Once I post a story w/ chapts) might be too. And I think the thing w/ Allen and RJ is kawaii! (Okay lame attempt to use japanese word in sentince.....)
person Satine
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats cool. are they real pplz or did you make them up?