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for Good Little Girl

by incestual

person moon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*moans* i want more! whats going to happen? Need more! Im so horny right now! *groans*
person Marly blackadder
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! plez right some more!!!!
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a happy writer, I got 13 comments! Woot!

ciao
person VaMpYrA
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg i cant believe u just left it there.. update soon please. the 1st chapter was good and then the 2nd had a cliff.. *so evil* lol but update soon..
person xena
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, good, good, good! Keep up the good work.
person Wie
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad...little short but not bad ^^ Please have more chapters up soon!
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. write another one! please read my story and review. there will be more... eventually
person Audrey
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm two words Brother sister. I think youd ROCK at writing one. TOTALLY HOT
person Snake Prophet
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Please do write more, this is Fucking awesome!!!
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it! Yay for freaks!