schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a decent story a little skimp on detail but good. Describe your characters looks better especially the mom. For the next chapter have the dad and mom get a little action
update soon
update soon
schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter... i liked the first one better. im picky cause i like great detail and stuff. i think it might actually be getting a bit old, getting it on with everyone in her house. especially ehr mom. thats a bit funny. i mean, if it was a one sht pic with just her mom that might be a bit better. so there. lol
schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t think I\'d like this, but scarily I do. Write more ^__^
schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all so much for taking the time and effort to read and review this! I\'m starting an e-mail newsletter thing for when I update, in case you check your e-mail more than you do AFF (I know I do.). Anyhow, if you\'d like to be added and you haven\'t (I sent out an e-mail about the second chaper being completed.) then please e-mail me or leave your e-mail on here!
ciao
ciao
schedule
March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like it! ^_^!
schedule
March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCK ME DADDY! I love it! lol. How about if daddy got her pregnant or something... Oooooooooooo. interesting... are we feeding your horniness yet? lol!
schedule
March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for your comments! I\'m trying my best to get back around to this but I\'ve been so tied up with school and college preparations. Please leave any requests on here or feel free to e-mail them to me! I will do my best!
ciao
ciao
schedule
March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this fic! (Hugs it and rolls around on the floor with it) It made me hornier than I\'ve been in recent memory! Please, please, PLEASE have Lucy\'s brother throw her down and fuck her stupid!!!! It would mean so much to me, because my real brother won\'t do it!!
schedule
March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking hot! ;__;!! I looveee incesssttttt!!! Soooo mucchhhh! And the sex scene was fucking awesome! >O!
Pleeaaseee doo morreeee. <3 I loved it! Cause I\'m a freak! <3!!
Pleeaaseee doo morreeee. <3 I loved it! Cause I\'m a freak! <3!!
schedule
March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please write another