rate_review Reviews

My Lord....
you are truly talented.
Your stories own.

Sure go ahead and write more try to stay with the father daughter ones though

This is really good but you are being a very bad little girl by bulling us into reviewing you so that you will update.

This story is really good and you need to update. You asked for so idea\'s maybe you could put a twist in with the lucy in her mother and maybe some more incest.(every loves incest. To those who don\'t then just ignore that part). Please update soon (I don\'t care if you said no begging)I beg you to update asap or I might be forced to do something drastic like say....behead this cute little teddy bear that sits on a shelf in my house and believe me you don\'t want that to happy or some body will be very upset. So don\'t cause anyone pain by getting the bear beheaded and update as soon as you finish reading this review.

Update now,
Lauri and Aki Together Forever.

P.S. With the bad girl thing I asume that you are a girl if you aren\'t then I am sorry and you can igore that part.

PSS Igonore what Anon said about the writing being crap because it isn\'t and alot of people want to know what happens next so there is your proof in Black and (grey?)weird ay..

PPSS I wrote happy in stead of happen in my review. sorry.

update update update now,

Please.

Think about that poor little teddy bear.

decent story but the writing is crap

It was a good story a bit short though, not enough details on the sex scenes. Chapters need to be longer and yes I would like to see more chapters. Maybe she becomes the agressore, or maybe her father and/or brother really rape her (possibly while mother watches) some anal ,oral,n/c scenes would be nice also.

lucy and her dad... more please

maybe more detailed?
more longer?
and more styles?
more tortures?
i don\'t know.

hey your stuff is pretty good so i\'d like to see more sometime

dude this is just wrong no more of this please