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for Ms. Nice Girl

by psychobunny

person ami
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know this may sound wrong but i want violet to end up with trey ... and i know colin going to try to give it a go with her . so yeah i don\'t know what i am trying to say but i think this is verygood chap. And can\'t wait till the next chap
person toro
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. i love your stories. plz keep going, don\'t stop. but i don\'t want \"anal\". can you let it out?
hope there would be a happy ending
person Alice M.
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God you have to up-date, PLZZZZZ! O_O
person AXCIZME
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! this is a good fic! I\'m glad that u thought it up. My friend did something similar to this one. Update soon! ^_^
person _twn
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s okay---> I\'m just happy that you continued writing this story. It\'s great--and this line just got me thinking: \"Remember, one false move, one scream and your old man gets it. But feel free to moan all you want.\"---> that\'s comforting. LOLz... keep up the awesome work and update when you can. We understand that authors do have a life of their own to live. ^____^
person pea
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so soon! Maybe now another chapter in a day?! It was good to learn about his background. I don\'t like that Colin guy lol but anyways it was a good chapter.
person anonymous
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3 words: Ooo. La. La. Sooner or later he has to confess his love to her. And maybe beat the shit out of Colin first.
person ami
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is wow ! that was good chapter
person pea
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is hotttt.. please update soon!
person anonymous
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, I must say. If Trey likes her so much, why is he harrassing her? And this girl needs to stick up for herself, not fall for him. Other than that, it\'s a good plot. Keep writing.