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for Ms. Nice Girl

by psychobunny

person Nessa 03
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dind\' feel like, logging on, but its Nessa03, whaaa i love this chappie! Violiet in control~
yay! keep writing! -
Nessa
person drake220
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! all right! violet is taking the lead!! boys of the world, hold onto your zippers!!
person _twn
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapter--you can see I don\'t like Collin. It\'s a good thing she realize the truth about him. ^^; Trey and her. You ending was different! You have to update soon. I can\'t wait for another update because I want to know what\'s going to happened. The last line...\"Try to relax\" now there\'s the girl you were talking about! Can\'t wait!
person Miki/Valen
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please update soon... I cannot stand all of this insolent slow writing process... Although I must recommend there be some dismemberment as I am a sadist...and blood, lots of blood. No, I am not mentally disabled or out of tune...just simply aching to inflict pain... I do not realize the foolishness of Violet, I would crave the feeling of touch anytime virgin or not, but I would be the one in control and would\'ve killed Trey in a matter of seconds...or hours ^_~ Write more, soon!
person urfan
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah...please update this is getting so interesting. very well written on Violet emotional confusion.
person ami
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay what ? don\'t get me wrong i glad she went back to trey i ques i will have to wait till next chap. i luv the chapter
person Yuri
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'m glad you updated I really enjoy the story. I hope Trey and Violet end up together that bastard Colin can go suck a nut.
person Nessa03
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~WHOA, this story is coming out nicely! keep writing! luv it! - Nessa
person Yuri
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I really love this story keep on writing.
person DBZchick
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Sensual, dramatic and romantic, and hot. Can\'t wait for more!

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