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for Ms. Nice Girl

by psychobunny

person ayesha
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. hope u update soon.
person me
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really, really nice. I really liked it. The whole stuff, especially the way you put Trey and explain his emotional issues. Though it\'s nice to read Violet doing things with all these characters, I wish there would be at least something every chap involving her and Trey... Hope you update really soon
person Christina
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Let\'s hear more about Trey and Violet. Afterall it was he who liked her before she became a hottie. Keep it going!
person Zingbits
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter ^^ I would still like to see Trey and her get together so I\'ll keep reading. Update sooN!
person Wow123
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story and \"WOW!!!!!!!!\".....it\'s really good....I don\'t know why but, I really want her and Trey to be together...yet, he raped her and was putting her throught was hell, but he also had a screw up family life that he is dealing with which made him think that it was normal for him to do that....I don\'t know....but, in the end I hope you will have the two of them together so how....Now, I also can\'t wait until she does the nasty with her teacher....He thinks he a good fuck huh???!!!...I think she needs to show him who\'s the best!!!!! Keep it coming please!!!!!!!!
person Yuri
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo what a hot erotic story ^_^. I just love the way this story is turning about and I hope that Mr. Matthews backs off of Violet she\'s Trey\'s girl ^_~. Keep writing its so good.
person Monkey Lady
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really getting a kick out of this! I look forward to seeing how far Violet will develop and take things. The teacher thrown in, too, is interesting and should be fun to read about. Yeah!
person xena
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too hot for words and I love the fact that Violet is fighting back and taking charge. I love when the tables are turned on conceited ass, pushy and abusive men. Keep the chapters coming please!
person _twn
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. \"You go girl!\" Violet sure showed him. That was great chapter. Loved what she did, but her teacher...wow! totally did not expect that! Really don\'t want her with him--like at all. ^^; Can\'t wait until you update again. ^___^
person gerry\'s girl
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what\'s she wearing? and when\'s she gonna fuck the teacher?!