rate_review Reviews

Umm. WOW! Umm. umm. I have her boots, mine have corset lacing up the front and back though. Umm. wow. Emotional skankness, how \"stimulating\" umm, keep it coming, i\'m likin it.

poor trey! i have to say the character development is great adn needed. i loved that line when the girl yells out \'skanky ho!\' and violet thinks \'damn right.\' nicely done there

Hey, I\'m waiting for your update for the longfest time! Hurry up! I really want to read more of it!!!!!

what happened to coming soon? LOLz...upate as soon as you can. ^^

Well, by far, its damn dirty, not my type of stuff, but I\'m bored. and porn starved. true love has to exist somewhere for her, I hope. Its a pity she\'s reduced to a materialistic slut now, who all of a sudden knows how to give a handjob like an expert. tho unrealistic, and screwed up, the fic isn\'t poorly written. Longer chapters, and some editing, you have spelling errors would improve it. I had such high hopes for her, to be excellent at breaking and devouring a man....yes, I\'m a dominatix, revenge kinda gal. But don\'t let her destroy everyone at once, one at a time, os they suffer extensively. And I really think she should have spent that money on a computer. In the end, sex and lust are material things, and pointless and empty.....unless you need a kid, sex is nothing. It\'s a pity we have libidos, she seems to be dubbed with an enormous one.

Thanks for that update! I loved it but I don\'t like her getting it on with Collin. ^^\' [remember _twn: just a play, just a play, just a play] just gotta keep repeating that to myself, it\'ll work. I can\'t wait until Trey and her get back together though. Somehow, Mr. Matthaws just doesn\'t appeal to me. ^^\'

Two words: UPDATE NOW!!!

please, please, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Shit, I\'LL be you personal love slave for another chapter. That was so fucking hot!

MR.TREY plz let get back with mr.trey. i think they are a great pairing !!!( is there any hope, yeah i sound a bit pathetic oh well ^.^)

whoooooooooooooooooooooo thats sum hot fire there! keep writing this, i love it! cant wait for the teacher one