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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this was meant as a joke...
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m sorry but that was just... not good... get a beta or at least read what you write before posting it
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good idea, Bro/Sis action & all, but it was way too short, not explicit enough and the grammar\'s off.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
meh!! more!!!
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was too unbelievable and rushed together awkwardly. try to elaborate a little.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One...too short, two you need a beta and three if she was on her hands and knees he would NOT be doing her missionary style. That is doggy style. Get your positions correct lame ass.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Not a flame* Get a beta, please. Otherwise, try to make this story a little longer and more descriptive and it\'ll be really hot.