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for brother sister love

by sluttybabe

person Tasha
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You suck stop writing now!
person Tom
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stop copying QUip!!
person QuiP
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, it\'s almost flattering to see that you tried to rip off my fic. Hah. Note I said ALMOST. Next time you want to plagiarise my fic, try to do it on another site. It\'s just sad.
person jimbo
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that fuckin sucked ass it was 2 short
person Kathryn Mertuil
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um....that sucked
person Jeje
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks just like somthing I read yesterday.... but it was longer and MUCH better.... U just can\'t put something together in wham-bam-thank-you.mam style..... it\'\'s baaaaaaaad.
person Jeje
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually managed to find the story!!!!
It\'s called Surprise, Surpise and the author is QuiP.
Damn!!! If u are going to steal someone elses story u gotta do a better cover-up!!!!!!
person Audrey
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Needs more
person ...
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Missionary style while on her hands and knees? Geez are you confused...

\"His semen rushed into her while he fucked her.\" geez he sure didnt last long..Please dont add anymore
person Kyo
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good fic