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for Torin & Samayel

by Mercyds

person midnighteyes
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story... I hope to see update real soon!!!!!!!!!
person midnghteyes
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really like this story.. hope to read more soon !!!!!
person Lady Demoonica Darkmoon
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this interesting, the thing about AFF is that it\'s all mostly plotless storys, but once in a while you find storys like this, praise be to your plot!!! Keep it up, okay?

Ja-ne!

- - - Lady Demoonica Darkmoon
person Shiba
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was very good i liked it alot ^^ i even saved it on a disc lol tell me when the next chapter comes out ok?
ps im the one who wrote \'running to the wolf\'
person shelly
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, I like how Torin totally just killed that female for like almost no reason, that was sweet. you have to update soon!!
person VTMarik
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s a fantastic story, i love it. It had me from the first time really.

I want more! More of the world especially!
person AHTIBAT
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT IS VERY GOOD KEEPS YOU ON EDGE OF SET TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT MAKES YOU HAVE THAT FUNY FEELING NOT MATTER WHAT SEX YOU ARE.. VERY GOOD DETAIL . LOVING IT . SO HOW YOUG WAS SAMAYEL WHEN TORIN SAY HIM? i LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
person memorietrail
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please,i do like it and do hope you keep writing.
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good start sweetie! Good to see that you are finally getting the stories out of that brilliant mind of your and putting them on paper... or the web. ^^ Word of advice, like I told you on AIM, you might want to provide some background on the races, species, etc. so the readers can follow it along better.