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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the review! All of my characters or either humans or camps. Tina is a "changer" and can turn into any animal she pleases, in chapter nine she turns into a raven, Jacob is just unsure of whether it was her or not. I tried to read your story after your nce review, but I had trouble with the huge info dump in the beginning. I think it would be really cool to maybe set up the setting of your story and describe the different races, like maybe a few don't get along? I'll look it over again later when I can formulate a better opinion. :)
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Samayel, I hope he's going to be ok. :-( How convenient for Ranadu. Torin is called away just before Ranadu shows up and Samayel is free for the taking... I smell a conspiracy! ^o^
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing world you've created there. Just happened upon yr story and I just couldn't stop reading. Am liking the dynamics between torin and samayel, hope to see samayel on top for a change ;) Good stuff!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice indeed. I like what you've created here. Now mind you, I only read the first two chapters (it's late and I'm very tired tomorrow is another day ^^), but I do enjoy the character set up and story line. It's an interesting plot and it's intrigued me. Thank you for the wonderful review by the way, I always love those types of responses ^^ I plan to read and review more on this tale, you've hooked me.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I used to read this story and then I lost sight of it. I didn't even recognize it till I got to the part about sam being so bruised. I think you are doing great keep up the good work. I would however like to read a little bit more about what keeps the two together and maybe any insecurities they have with each other or just being together
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated this story... I thought it long dead, but was presently surprised, when i got your update... This story is so awsome...
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is really good so far please continue and do something interesting with the human like giving him to torin\'s brother or something
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh i know this is going to sound whinny but i really loved this and i want more. PLEASE!!!!!! @_@ i love this and i can\'t wait for more please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910
thanx mizukimarr910
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the update.. very interesting story... Hope to read more soon!!!!!