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for Danbrook's Angel

by Shaznay

person anonymous_fan
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok 3 quick things, i love this story. i love your sex scene between bobby and oliver, and please dont hurt oliver, hes too sweet to hurt, please dont let him get raped or anything by those bad guys cuz thats just mean :( :( :( so please dont hurt oliver!
person angle
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it, please update soon
person MissE
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome! they finally make love that really brings a tear, please update soon and never give up this story
person dream
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I can\'t wait to find out what happens
person Tessa
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! Please update soon!!!!
person blur
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet they finally make love to each other, for a minute I thought that one of Bobby\'s friend\'s were in the bathroom stall and over heard them. Well I\'m really happy with the way it came out update soon
person sugarplum
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s mean that even though Bobby tells Oliver he loves him, he won\'t show his feeling in public. I think Phillp is really nice though
person Anonymous_Fan
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow can i say ....YUMMY! i love this sex scene. wish my man would wake me up like that lol. really great story scribbles cant wait for your next installment :-)
person Tessa
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update Soon!!! I beg you!!!!!!!
person surgerplum
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo... glad that you update both stories, and don\'t sell yourself short your a great author keep up the good work.