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for Danbrook's Angel

by Shaznay

person J
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont remember if i ever reveiwed this story or not, but i think it was one of the first i read..its actually one of the few i remember..I read them..then forget about them like in a week....So i think you're a great writer and should continue writing...of course im only basing this opinion on THIS story..i havent read any of your others...So anywho...Since i couldnt remember if i had left a comment and was too lazy to check..I just decided to post one...I was looking at the stories i wanted to recomend..ANd yours got picked..but it turns out i dont know how to fucking add stories to that recommended list....(and no im not a blonde) lol so anywho..if i ever figure out how..you will be on my recommended list.....Other than that, i love your story...it was awesome...bye!
person ericamorse
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. I couldn\'t wait to read the next chapter. i i cried for Oliver and Bobby in chapter 10 and felt overly joied in 11. i hope you write more so that i could read them. thanks again,
Erica
person aurora
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow *sniffle* that was beautiful......really
person shfl
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Totally loved it.
person surgerplum
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very touching
person redfox9t
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending, i really like how it turned out with just the two of them starting a new life.
person blur
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice wrap up. I almost threw up when you did the rape part, it was so distrubing. But the ending was perfect, how you make more stories
person MissE
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write another story, about how their life turned out?
person dream
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good those boys disereved to get put in jail, can\'t believe the police officer actually but his thing up his butthole. I feel so bad and also mad, they should have got more then 8 years in jail.
person koolchick
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you hurt Oliver, so bad? He\'s so sweet and puts up a good innocent act. I\'m just glad that he and Bobby can live somewhere eles without worries