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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
People should really review something when they read it. Lots of people have read this. So I\'m reviewing. I\'m not sure what to think of the story. The guy creeped me out a little at the beginning and I never grew to like him. I didn\'t really care for either one. You have some great descriptions in there. I think it could be flushed out a bit. I got bored and skipped by a lot of the middle and I\'m sorry for that. But it has potential.