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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
que va a pasar entre el decano joven y la alumna de la facultas, por favor actualizar muy pronto, ana maria
schedule
March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy! Finish this! Lol. But seriously, please? Very good work :) Anticipating chapter four...
schedule
March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! Please dont make me wait through this nasty cliff hanger!
schedule
February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very erotic
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a good premise for a story, but it seems rushed, not thought out. There are some spelling mistakes and the grammar is off. If you use word to type up your story it will point out any mistakes be they spelling or grammar and it will also let you know how many pages your chapters are. It\'s a good tool and if you know HTML just add your codes as you go and when you’re done copy and paste them into Notepad or WordPad which ever you use and everything will work out. Also make your chapters longer, your entire fic when copied to word and all of the unnecessary returns are taken out doesn\'t equal two full pages. I don\'t know about you but I like to read and your small chapters just doesn\'t cut the mustard. Take a look at \"Woof\" or \"Lydia\'s Dad\" they are within your same category, just for the length of their chapters and spelling, not their contents and you will see what I mean.
Good Luck and keep writing!
Good Luck and keep writing!
schedule
February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! update very soon!
schedule
February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good begining....chapters culd be a little longer though...
schedule
February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing and post soon