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for Teach Me

by scarletflame128

person harryhollow
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!
person swiss miss
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! UTTERLY FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC!!! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ASAP!!! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO STOP LIKE THAT!!!
person gothic miss
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked you writing style not to little or too much plot, a job well done. most of these stoys are crudely put together and have awful spelling, weldone for not being one of them,i hope you continue. good luck
person line
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the diry talking....very sexy. Cant wait to see more of what will happen next.
person Tanya
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I can\'t help it.
I LOve it!
person scarletflame128
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much, guys! :) Do you guys have any suggestions? Maybe I can try to merge the ideas and make them work. :)

:: Kristina ::
person Bored fan
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man it really good and its alright the way you draw out the pleasure good work and update soon
person karen
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn your name is very close to the princess name you know lol that was great
person M
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I like the firs 2 chapters’ very much… Keep up the good work!!!!!
LOL
person Tanya
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really really good! I love it! This is my kind of story, not just some wham-bam-thank-you-maam ones, that just go \"He slowly fucked her and then she came!\" LOL!
I hate those!! I like them really descriptive. Keep it up! More to come, I hope!