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awe the moment was ruined! lol great chapter~ can\'t wait to for the next one!

Yay! i really liked this chapter... he\'s finally starting to notice her more, hooray! oh, please hurry and update soon. i can\'t wat to read what\'s going to happen next!

oh no! poor Corlani. please update soon... i hate cliffys! :) great job on the story!

More, More! Loved the chapter, and loving the story. How aweful of you to leave me with a cliffhanger! My guess is Corlani must have heat stroke. Hope Nekoda will be softer on her in the future. My only complaint is that you need to update more often, because you write beautifully. A story as good as this is hard to come by, and now that I\'ve found it, I\'m becoming very greedy, and I want more!

Hi!

I love this story; in one asspect I like Lisanna, cause she\'s a woman and can handle herself. In another asspect, I think she\'s a cocky bitch..I love this story, great job!!!! It\'s brilliantly written!! You and your friend are amazing writers, maybe have Talen and Lisanna be together..though I don\'t think Lisanna would put up with him. Hopefully, Nekoda could actually, \"love,\" Corlani, not just want her for only sex.

Beautifully written chapter. I\'m so glad to see that you\'ve updated this story. It\'s one of my favorites! Poor Corlani, everyone assumes that\'s she\'s completely useless. But how can you be good at anything if no one has ever taken the time to teach you anything. Glad to see that Nekoda has decided to teach her how to handle a knife. Perhaps he will soon come to appreciate her in a new way! I don\'t like Lisanna anymore than Corlani likes her. Hope she\'ll be hitting the road soon. She\'s been stealing too much of Nekoda\'s attention away from Corlani, and we can\'t have that. But, I guess it\'s all this character angst that makes for a good story.

I love your story so far, please update SOON!

Hi!
I absolutely love this story!!! I\'m well, a bit of a feminest;but I hope Corlani makes Nekoda well, maybe look bad..I bet she could fight..if given the chance..and as for this wondering woman...i don\'t know about her, she just kinda came out of nowhere. I really hope you\'ll keep updating this story, and I really hope Corlani and Nekoda will get together, he is just so arigant, and thinks he\'s so, \"great,\" and it\'s like, you make Corlani seem well, weak. I know, I am well aware that this was how women were treated, so you\'re writing is perfect portraying that!! I normally don\'t go on adultfanfiction.net..but I went on it for a friend, read her story, and was looking around and found yours!!! You and your friend are brilliant writers, so please keep up this story!!!!
Tessa
P.S. I\'m a huge fan of Native American culture, among other things..so I love this story!!! with the feel you and your friend are giving..

Great story so far. I\'m in love with the characters! Please update soon!

AWESOME UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ