rate_review Reviews

Its interesting.
I'd like to see where you're going with this.

I hope to see more.

your writing is a bit confusing, try thinking out what you want to say first, then write it out, then read it out loud to see if it makes sense. I am certain that you are being vague on purpose, but you don\'t have enough of a plot yet to draw a reader in. I would suggest rewriting this and giving it a fresh start-over.