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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it. Though I think Randy..is unnessecary. hes an idiot. But I think that Ilana and Celest have like, the perfect relation ship. Master gets drawn to slave thing. Thats cool. Make Celest take Ilana with her to hell! That would be awesome. ^^ Please hurry with the other chaps!
~Taki~
~Taki~
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to get better grammar, and put in more breaklines. Try using paragraphs and easier-to-read sentences. I like your plot, but the lack of paragraphs makes it hard to read.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a sick, dark person. I love it! Excelent story, nice plot. Continue whenever! Can you please review my story, im not logged on but it is \"Schoolgirls\" in original-original. Nice!