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for His First

by craxy

person Brittany
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story, its sweet and deliciously descriptive. I cant wait for the next chapters!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha... i\'m at colins house...waiting...don\'t be long!!
person Mewa
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! that was some good stuff right there! damn that was hott!!! lol cant wait until the next update!
person anonymous_fan
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans sels with hand* whoohoo! damn you got talent, i love the sexual tension between colin and brendan, they are so hot, and this is one of the best frottage scenes ive read *droolz* cant wait for them to get to colins house *droolz even more*
person DraculUnknown
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!Great 8th chapter!I was waiting for that!! That was way worth the wait!! didnt make sense but who cares anyway!?? lol GREAT
person DraconWolf88
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D\'yamn, that was HOT! n_~V
person Morgan
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. that was intense. i could seriously *feel* that, despite being female and not having a dick.

that was really good. keep writing cuz this is really amazing so far.
person Divinitylost
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was sooooooo good swear to god it was, but please up date more often please!!!!!!
person lo
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting hotter. I can\'t stand it, I\'m melting. Great job!! I like where the relationship is going. Keep up the good work.
person Zephyr
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Usually I\'m all for the big, detailed reviews. This one...this has reduced me to a two word review.

WOW! HOT!

Very nice! Keep up the good work!

**Zeph**