rate_review Reviews

this is a great story, i\'m dying to read the rest, don\'t make us wait too long for the next chapters.

*squeal*

Ok sorry I just love this story so much!!

hee hee :D

MORE?!?!?!? I love the idea! And how you wrote it! So smooth and..... YUMMY LEMONS!

hurry with the next chapter, please!! i can\'t wait... stop keeping us in suspense!! :) hehe.

*fanning herself violently* oh wow...that was just indescribably hawt!
Okay, so have I mentioned before just how much I enjoy your writing? Because if not I\'ll tell you now. And wow, this chapter was just....wow I am completely speechless.
The song detracts slightly from the over all feel of things. I thought it sort of interupted the flow of the reading but after finishing the chapter I think it was a good addition.
SOmetimes you need a bit of interuption and slowing down to make the over all \'climax\' better. Really excellant chapter, and did I mention how unbelievably HAWT!! it was?
I think you should put a cold shower warning in the header of the chapters that are going to be like this one, otherwise you\'ll lure poor unsuspecting writers (or readers) into it and have them panting and clenching muscles throughout the entire thing.
Absolutely gorgeous story so far by the way. I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter.
UPDATE SOON!!!

Lots of love,
Abi Snitche
Author of \'Veritas\' Arc I and II

This is officially my favourite slash story of all time. I didn\'t want it to end! The two of them are so perfect together, it makes me want to cry. I loved your story, and I\'ll be back to read it again and again. It was so sweet and hot at the same time. ^______^

POST MORE AHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHA *DIES*

*mouth hangs open* guh..
LOVE IT! must. update. sooooooooooooon.
pweeze?
your characters are completely and utterly brilliant, and the sex *my god* the SEX.
*bows down before you*

How...how...HOW COULD YOU!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I don\'t want it to end! Not yet!! Oh god that was fantastic! I loved EVERY minute of it! EEEEVERY MINUTE I SAY!!!! Oh god, when they were humping each other on the car, I was like, I bet Colin\'s brother\'s gonna come out! Then I was like, whew! I can\'t wait to see what happens when he finds out. Hehe, it\'d be awesome if he found out like, walking in on them kissing or groping or something. XD More traumatic, I\'ll say, but still, it\'d be awesome. Of course, it\'ll be good no matter what you do! ^__~ Just keep it goin\'!! I love it sooo much! ^____________^


P.S. Can you email me when you get the next chapter up? I\'ll greatly appreciate it! ^.^

So HOT! Yowzah!