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for His First

by craxy

person Savage
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoooowheeee!! *fans self* you madame are an expert at writing smoldering hot sex scenes!
and Colin and Brenden mmmman are they fine, keep it up!!!
person Jiro
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having \'fun\'? \'Fun\' is watching re-runs of the simpsons. This is so much more than \'fun\' ^_^ Update soon!!!
person Mewa
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! bathtub sex! lmao awww he wants a meaningful relationship with brendan! so sweet! update!! lol
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy, yummy.
person Katie
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. Just...I mean...WOW. The first time I read the first chapter and, being a teenager, I was disgusted at the melodrama of the main character. But when I got into it....WOW!! I LOVE this. This is AWESOME!!! PLEASSSE update soon....PLEASE!!
person nina
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squeeeee XD sooo good i really enjoyed that it is extremly smutty while still maintaing cutness and affection. please write more it is ohhh so enjoyable. well done very realistic too ^_~
person anonymous_fan
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey its me lol, umm thank you so much for updating this story, it took a while but you did it and dont worry im pretty sure everyone will agree with me when i say \"WE LOVE THE SMUT\" lolz, as always great chapter, i love the way youve got brendan with a sort of dual sided mind about the relationship he has entered with colin, its really interesting seeing his feelings, and of course i love the way you have portrayed colin, he is so good to brendan lolz so good even I want him :-D
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn .. i loveee the dirty talk!!
person maria
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee...yaa...we sure \"hate\" the smut...<3 you! Took you forever to update..............worth the wait. ^_~
person lo
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how you do it. It just keeps on getting hotter and hotter. Most writers after a while get boring, but you...you have me hooked. The story just keeps getting better. I like the situation you created, and I really like the characters you created. Keep up the good work.

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