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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! What a great story! I\'ve only read to chapter 7, which is hilarious, by the way. I totally love Anne\'s character so far. The sex scene was great too ^_~
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omggg!!! the newest chapter was sooooo cute!!!
i want more!!
i want more!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, I do so enjoy the smut *purrs* I woulda killed you for evil EVIL cliffies if I didn\'t want more. So yeah, more soon!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
new reader! that was HOT!! i think i have a nosebleed! XDDD aww, colin wants him!! YAY! Wait till Mike finds out!! XD Protective older brother??? UPDATE SOON!!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. This is sooooooo sexy! I want me a Colin.... Mmmmmm...I\'ll be back for more!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bring on the smut my friend!!!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, uhm....please update? I really like reading this. Your characters fit so well together. I can\'t wait to see Brenden\'s(hope I spelled that right, I\'m to lazy to go back and look) wild streak out and at it\'s peak! Seems so promising. I\'m also waiting for Michael\'s reaction. Please don\'t make it to angsty, I\'m in need of a slightly light-hearted fluffy fic! But, it is your\'s, so do as you wish! Waiting for the next chapter! It will probably be better than the rest so far! Toodlez!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
:::fans self:::
That scene on the back of the car. Yeah. That was...
...Yeah.
Let me pull my thoughts together. Hold on. :::really annoying music when you\'re put on hold over the phone ensues::: Okay. So, back to that car scene. That was one of the hottest fucking things I\'ve ever read. Seriously. I do the hotness of it no justification with my lame vocabulary... but it\'s YOUR fault my brain\'s fried right now, so you\'ll just have to deal with my mildly-retardant compliments.
I anticipate the next chapter. And I\'ll read it WITHOUT my equallycrazedboysmutfangirl friend reading over my shoulder because she just had to know what I kept slamming my head on the desk for. She\'s drooling in a slightly comatose state on the floor right now. Your fault, too.
Anyway. Uh, good story? Really good story? -Insert positive adjective of your choice- story. I\'m going to go and stop being a creepy over-zealous reviewer now.
:::fans self:::
That scene on the back of the car. Yeah. That was...
...Yeah.
Let me pull my thoughts together. Hold on. :::really annoying music when you\'re put on hold over the phone ensues::: Okay. So, back to that car scene. That was one of the hottest fucking things I\'ve ever read. Seriously. I do the hotness of it no justification with my lame vocabulary... but it\'s YOUR fault my brain\'s fried right now, so you\'ll just have to deal with my mildly-retardant compliments.
I anticipate the next chapter. And I\'ll read it WITHOUT my equallycrazedboysmutfangirl friend reading over my shoulder because she just had to know what I kept slamming my head on the desk for. She\'s drooling in a slightly comatose state on the floor right now. Your fault, too.
Anyway. Uh, good story? Really good story? -Insert positive adjective of your choice- story. I\'m going to go and stop being a creepy over-zealous reviewer now.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD....another hott chapter!im dying to know whats going to happen next.....i cant wait too long! plz update soon!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a HOT, sweet, HOT story. It was an very interesting turn of events to have Brendan being the \"aggressor\" way back at the begining of the story. You write beautifully, full of vivid description and feeling. My only concern, and it\'\'s a small one, is a few typos here and there. Great job and I hope you continue.