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*squirms obediently*

oh, right, heh. *is a sub*

ahem.

good show. update when you can.

And squim we will. This is one of the hottest stories I\'ve ever read. You are so GOOD and these two together are incredible. You really know how to use detail to make your readers feel the action, hee he. Good stuff and hope the next one isn\'t too long off.

Yay, I\'m so happy! I discovered this story shortly after you added chapter 9 and I\'ve re-read it so many times while waiting for another update. It\'s by far the scrummiest story I\'m reading at the moment. It\'s so beautifully written and because you pay as much attention to the characters\' emotions as to the events themselves during these deliciously long sex scenes I feel I know the characters really well. You plant such vivid images into my head that I just have to keep coming back for more!

By the way, are you a fan of the manga \"Death Note\"? I became interested very recently after stumbling across some fanart of the two main characters which, for me, was the perfect visualisation of Colin and Brendan (if you reconsider their ages slightly).

Anyway, I loved chapter 10 and the ending was so sweet that I felt a little pervy at witnessing such a private moment...! Looking forward to the next update. ~FairyV xx

Okay this is the hottest and sexiest story that has ever been posted anywhere, I don\'t know how you can keep makeing the sex scenes so hot, expecially when there is so many of them ^.^ Also personally I am a huge fan of dirty talk so chapter 10 was probebly my favourit. So keep it up and don\'t make us wait so long for the next one PLEASE

................fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck me! that was hot! oh my god im sorry but fuuuuuuck that was so fucking hot! after reading ch10 i actually got up and jumped my boyfriend when he gt here *fans self* damn hes still passed out wondering what made me so horny lolz. you are good girl! i love this story. and i very very very eagerly await your next update :-)

::squirming:: dear gawd...that was hawt...

I actually thought it couldnt get any better than incredible, but omfg!IT DID!The 10th chapter rockd!!!It was way worth the wait! plz update soon!

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Holy fucking hell!!!
That was soo hot... sooo friggin hot!!
That chapter alone is like omg I cant even explain it.
wow... hmm I gotta go attack my boyfriend now.

Awsome!

OMG~!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!!!!

MORE CRAXY MORE!!!!!!!!!!!