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for His First

by craxy

person turtledonkey27
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really wonderful...i don\'t really know what else to add. i love how their relationship developed seemingly out of nowhere and now they\'re all emotional and feeling the love--usually this kinda bothers me, but it totally works with these two. they obviously had the friendship/caring part before the smut, so it does work, and beautifully at that. i\'m glad that colin\'s as affected by it as brendan is, his breakdown at the end was a surprise but very heartfelt. you can tell that he\'s been hit with it pretty hard. now, i can\'t wait to see how mike reacts to it all. i hope he\'s happy for them, but you just had to plant the seed of doubt by mentioning jealousy! darn you! i\'m really looking forward to your next update because this story is one of my all-time favorites. :D
person RedSharpie
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is so real and so cute and so HOTT! Ahem... Well, just keep it up. UPDATE SOON!
person trish
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking fantastic story!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE~
person Serpenteyes
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woho! That was hot! *fans meself* Great story so far but you have to get Colin to rim Brendan sometime! ^___^
person Heath-bar
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg soooo good i love it do death! you so gotta keep it going .... one question why was he crying? okies just keep it going
person lo
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear just keep on getting better. Not your writing, that is already awsome, but this story. I read more and just love it more. You are very very good!! Keep up the good work.
person Mewa
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn this was a great chapter!! *squirms* i wanna know!! i wanna know what\'s going to happen next!! update soon!!!
person frost
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear jesus that was the hottest thing ever! seriously, so fuckin hot!!! XD

Colin and Brendan are so great together, i can\'t wait to see how things turn out, and the end was sooo sweet. It\'s just too good to even explain...

now, off for a cold shower ;)
person Dadella
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if I\'ve reviewed this or not, yet, but I absolutely love this story...
Your writing style is something to be commended... It\'s so... descriptive, but it doesn\'t take away from the feel of the scene...
Reading this actually gives me goosebumps...

I\'m half reluctant to read your other stories, afraid it won\'t be as good as this, and ruin the affect, but something tells me I shouldn\'t be disappointed...

I really cannot wait for an update... keep it up!
person dragonfly
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make him mad and jealous.... like he\'s mad and doesn\'t know why, cuz he\'s jealous.... heeheehee *cackles evily* awesome chapter!!!!! best one so far.... other than spoon.... no, i take it back. they are all so fucking good!!! please just write more...k??? i eagerly await *smirk*