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for His First

by craxy

person SimoneV
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..ZOMG!!!!!! All the time reading this story from the beginning to the end I\'ve been all hot and bothered... >.< I really hope you don\'t stop updateing here, cuz I NEED the next chapter!!!!! *is craving it lol*
person Draconix
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon, it\'s one of the best stories i\'ve ever read. keep it up!
person Karui Sakurazuka
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! That was AWESOME!!! Whatever you do, please KEEP WRITING!!! ^_^
person keyonnamc
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo in love with this story. You had amazing smut. I loved the dirty talk.

You sure know how to keep your readers interested, especially with the way Chapter 10 ended. I am anxious….I just can’t wait for Chapter 11. Update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! It\'s been forever!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you MUST update again soon. We\'ve been waiting for much too long!
person desperatedesire_maliciousintent
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update. This is one of my favorite Fanfictions and I\'ve been waiting forever for an update, I hope it comes soon.
person UW
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS YOU ARE DAMN GOOD!
person Cory
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... Why won\'t you update?! This is SOOOOO good....
person Fruitbat
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I\'m so in love with Brendan and Colin right now. For like the last month i have been logging in and checking for updates. please don\'t keep us waiting.... *sad begging puppy dog eyes*