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Excellent intimate scenes, although maybe . . . hm, I'm not sure, but occassionally I forget that there's dialogue while the action is going on, so maybe you could intersperse the dialogue a little more, break it up?

I do hope you finish this. You've implied that Michael might be jealous. I hope he's not jealous in the I'm-actually-gay way because Anne doesn't deserve that. It would make sense for him to be jealous of his bestfriend getting a boyfriend (who takes up much time, like making him sneak out on a party that Michael arranged), and add to it that his older brother now has a boyfriend . . . it might make him worry that they like each other more than they like him, when he's used to being closer to both of them than they are to anyone else. Good luck with chapter 11! Conflict is harder to write than sweet smut, non?

why did colin cry? =T

i love those hot scenes between the two characters. the inexperienced brendan is wonderful =]

everything you put in all your chapters were well worth it

i cant wait to find out what happens next

oh! with your swaps of povs, you did a great job with that. it move smoothly with the story and confusion wasnt a problem

I loved this! i hope you're able to update soon!!

Oh please update! I've been waiting for sooo sooooo long! lol I keep reading it over and over. Please!!!

I thought this story is just awesome! I wish you would continue to write the story. I liked to see where their relationship goes.

I thought this story is just awesome! I wish you would continue to write the story. I liked to see where their relationship goes.

Damn, this shit is great.

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and thats all I have to say

So, Is this story over, or are you going to update again. I've been reading it for awhile and I just keep waiting and waiting for the next chapter, and it never comes. I love this story.

hmm ... I love it! I have quickly come to a desision that this is a very good story and I love it!