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for His First

by craxy

person Shinna
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to reading the next chapters. update soon
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please?

CP the medicated
person Jiro
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update damn you! This is too good not to just stop there! GAH!
person jill
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I mean, I NEVER review stories or things like that, but honestly, I love this. :) Such a sweet story, and it\'s got wonderful potential. I love the fact that Brendan has the same taste in music as I do, assuming that the acoustic one-man cd is what I think it is. Either way, excellent work. Kindly update soon.
person yami990
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please really good story so far.
person Aphrael
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really cute, and sweet. You are going to continue, right?
person aphinna
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good please write more soon
person shameika
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic update soon
person Shinna
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed what I\'ve read so far. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Siarra
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh... This is such a lovely fic.
The story is well written, absolutely wonderful and intriguing, just sweet enough without making it seem too syrupy and obvious and losing its interest. Your characters are also very nice, having enough depth and and their thoughts make them quite realistic and very loveable.
I\'d be very delighted should continue this soon.