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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. I like the tension that you have created. Keep up the good work
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fuckin story update soon
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh so sweet!!!!! i hope its a happy ending..please please please!!!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooo!! kissing! lets get on to the good stuff!!! XD
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ill admit i completely expected this to sux maybe thats why im so completely blown away i can relate to the main chatacter not about being gay but with everything else lonelyness just wanting someone to hold u make that empytiness go away i love this its just so much more than i expected its wonderfull please update soon im not one for reveiwing i dont do it unless the story really deserves it and you and this story deserve praise wonderfull job more please
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg how cute. btw just a point i have to make..... I HATE CLIFFHANGERS lol, you get us all excited with the beginning of a kiss then bam no more *cries* pls update soon I love this story!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Totally spectacular! This is sweet but sensual! GOLD STAR! I\'m lovin\' it!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story. The only thing you could change to make it better is to be more consistant. There are a few times when you switched the guys\' names. That causes confusion. So I guess just go back and double check that you are talking about the right boy. Other than that... I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read the next chapter. update soon
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m anxious to read the next chapter.