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for His First

by craxy

person sam
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil pure evil
person yoarashi (sam)
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur mean so very mean evil pure evil
person lo
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, Love the tension. I like how the story is developing.
person ash
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why?! why must you end it there! i want more of these two! its wonderful! ..am i being greedy cuz i wanna read your fic? ack! i dont care! update it soon or i will be forced to cry so much i flood the world!!!!
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, now you\'ve got me all hot and bothered. *Thwaps you across the back of the head* More, now.

CP the distracted
person Divinitylost
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it has a sweetness and caring that I hardly ever right about...your story has love mine have head games and power plays I think the next fic I write will be sweeter Like yours, one thing though there are a lot of water related analagies in this chapter might wanna think of something else next time
much love and respcet
Divinitylost
person Mewa
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG! I cant believe u stopped there!!! ahhh! oh i really hope u update soon!!
person CrazyDramaQween
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!! You are sooo evil for leaving the story like that!!
I love it though...
*patiently waiting*
person Lena
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies several times over* Need. More. Soon! Good story, write more, k?
person Daze
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr. Please finish Pwlease!