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for His First

by craxy

person Lena
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stares for a moment* My God! You rock my socks and the rest of my wardrobe! ...Okay, stupidity aside, I thought the chapter was bloody brilliant. Can\'t say much other than... well duh! You rock!
person skarrah
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was seriously hot! probably one of the best lemons i\'ve read. *grins* bravo!

~skarrah.
person D
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I really wish my first time was like that...that was sweet and hot all at the same time.
person Lena
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was damn intense! I loved the last chap and the one before it. You sure have a way with words ~_~ Puurrrfect. Still, a real lemon would be real nice *poke poke*
person warconq
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so perfect. I have never had the pleasure of reading a fic that showed a first time experience that well read like it was a first time expericence. This was so freaking good. I hope your going to post soon this is becoming my favorite slash story. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
person Jrio
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope this develops into a relationship...not just sex..!!
person Mewa
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! that was great! its so happy! ok well not happy in the sense taht it made colin! XD but its so fluffy! so coot! cant wait for the next update!!
person anonymous_fan
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have just one thing to say. Wow! that was hot.
person warconq
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet story and it has real moments in it. Not that I don\'t love the stories that are all romantic fluff that have everything go right and no-such-thing as human error. I like that this story seems like it could really happen to any guy in america. Big brownie points for that. Till your next chapter. ((^^))