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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!dont stop there!!If you intended that end of this chapther a cliffie then dang u! haha! jk..i just love it!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have waited sooo long for you to update this story..it is very good...update sooner you!!!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! cant wait until the next update!!!!! i wanna know how things are going to be between brendan and colin!! XD
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hoping you\'re going to write more from here! I\'m loving this story! Brendan and Colin are so cute together! I\'ll be watching for an update!
**Zephyr**
**Zephyr**
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Paris Hilton. \'That\'s hot!\' Holy crap I wish my first time was like that. Wow! I am just breathless I can\'t ever think one how to write how much I just love this story. Please I need another update its manditory for my survival. I wait patciently for your next chapter. ((^^))
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest original fiction I\'ve read today.
Good job. I absolutly love it.
Good job. I absolutly love it.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*exhales deeply* whoah. that. was. hot. Im going to be honest with you, Im a guy who enjoys reading these kinds of stories and let me just say oput of the hundreds ive read this one is definitely top3! definitely number 2 on my list. but that is a very good thing as im a very critical person and it takes alot for me to like a story :) Congrats x3 my friend, i cant wait to read more of this story, especially about the \"morning after\" lol Pls update soon cuz im on the edge of my seat.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! they had sex! woot! lol yay for them! XD cant wait until u update again!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I thought that the story would get boring with the prolonged sex scene, but it just got better. That was so hot. Great job at describing what the characters are felling and thinkig. This was great!!! keep up the good work
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!
That was soo hot!! I\'m like... wow
Is it hot in here or is it just me? *fans face*
I cant wait for more
That was soo hot!! I\'m like... wow
Is it hot in here or is it just me? *fans face*
I cant wait for more