schedule
April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting this wonderful story! Ok, it\'s not finished yet but I really love it so far and I\'m so looking forward to your next update - especially since ... could it be you left us with a cliffie??!
Brendan\'s going to see Colin again... I\'m curious what else will happen on this party!
Brendan\'s going to see Colin again... I\'m curious what else will happen on this party!
schedule
April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg! More, damn you! I wanna know what happens at the party! *bites nails*
schedule
April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s romantic with out being overly romaticized, which is really, really hard to do. We all thing about how good we want the experience to be but with that fanticsy we lose the believablity. I commend you cause you made this a story that I can believe and have multiple \'deep sighs\' after reading. Thanks for writing it and I am donateing $25 to Ayla\'s cause today so hopefully I\'ll get to read more of it. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
schedule
April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I seriously try to be more helpful with my reviews, but you have robbed me off words.
Let me just say:
<3<3<3<3<3!
and okay I\'m out.
Let me just say:
<3<3<3<3<3!
and okay I\'m out.
schedule
April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutrly love the way you are writing this story. I actually like the characters and then there is the hotness factor. this is turing out to be great!! keep up the good work.
schedule
April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, amazing, FANTASTIC stuff... update now! Shoo! Update!!
schedule
April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i really really like this. i like never review either, so feel special.
schedule
April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The characters in this fic are just so...likable! I love all of them. Sometimes it\'s hard to sort through the muck of badly written stories on AFF.net but I quite liked yours. It\'s well written; only a couple minor errors; the characters are developing believably, and the dialogue isn\'t the stilted exclamations of \'he said\'s \'she said\'s that make some fics so unbearable to read. I really like the fic so far, so I hope you continue with it. I wonder what Micheal will think about Brendan sleeping with his brother...
schedule
April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zomg. You must update, Usagi-chan commands it. It\'s really really really good. Or maybe I like lemony scenes. WHATEVER. Either way, you must updsate it.
(Any spelling or grammatical errors in the review, please ignore. I\'m not wearing my glasses ^^;;)
(Any spelling or grammatical errors in the review, please ignore. I\'m not wearing my glasses ^^;;)
schedule
April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. You made this even more interesting. Encore! But now you can\'t stop here. Gentle warning. If you don\'t update I\'ll kill you in a completely passive way. *lol*