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for His First

by craxy

person Tahn
schedule November 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is really sweet, I hope you continue it. I wanna see how his brother takes the news.
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really good story. nice smut. sorry its ended.
person Pummpie
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love this story!!!!! Why did. Stop writing? What happens next????
person schen
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what happened to this story? it's way past its update... ???
person Ikippiki
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this was so hot! I'll be waiting impatiently for an update!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY!! I hope you update!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hola, i read the first 10 chapters of this forever ago, when it was first being put up, and i absolutely loved it. i was wondering if you were ever planning on finishing it? i hope so cause it's defenitly one of the best stories out there!
person Fain
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you. I remember loving this story way back when...it was actually being worked on! What happened? You left all of us poor readers in suspense. It's a wonderful story. If you suddenly lost all inspiration to write, I understand, but I wish you would start up again on this. Hope you get back to writing soon.
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, craxy,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
The story appears to be abandoned, but it is incredibly hot and we do have ten chapters.
Thank you:)
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AUGH!!! I was sooooooo loving this fic! And then I saw when it was last updated and I wanted to cry! You must write more for this, you've been doing so well for the first 10 chapters, it's all really great. Just a little more is all we ask! You do such a great job of showing Brenden and Colin's emotions, they're just so sweet together, and the sex is great! Please for the love of all that is good and Yaoi WRITE MORE!!!!