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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was short n' sweet, just the way i like 'em!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you read my mind. I love that oh my . . .im shivering and it isnt from the cold air in my room, this was awesome.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was certainly thought-inspiring. I\'m a fan of twisted poetry and this one really hit a spot, and I can easily say that it\'s the best Valentine\'s Day\'s poem I\'ve ever read. (insert evil snigger here) Although I admit that it was a touch too romantic to have that certain feel of utter begging, it made me smile.
You should try writing more of these.
You should try writing more of these.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent poem, it really held my attention. I read it multiple times, smiling.
My only critique is that \'Apocolypse\' should be Apocalypse.
-Adrian
My only critique is that \'Apocolypse\' should be Apocalypse.
-Adrian