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for Ava

by Aphrael

person redtatsu
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not real big on slash or original stories, but I don\'t know what it is about this one that I just can\'t stop thinking about. This most resent chapter really turned me for a loop and I want MORE!! PLEASE continue!!!!!
person Mari
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more.Please?
person DarkMystik
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahh~! *tears* nooooo~! *sniff* it\'s painful to have to wait for the next chapter =*(

hehe this is a lovely and delicious story and i just can\'t wait for the chapters to come!! i am now a loyal fan of your story and will check back every weekend! thanks for this wonderful story~! =)
person Mewa
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no! poor ava! damn that mar! evil!!!! cant wait for the next update!
person Mari
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey..I kinda liked it :) You go girl/boy!
person Lina
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I LUV THE STORY!! KEEP IT GOIN!!
person Zephyr
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww!! That was such a great chapter, even if it was horrible at the same time! I don\'t know who to feel worse for: Ava or Kael. I think you\'re gonna have to update more often then just the weekends! ;) I absolutely love this story. I keep checking to see if you\'ve updated it. You totally made my day! Love the story! I can\'t wait to see the rest!
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Ava bless him. Poor Kael to of course,, you\'ve really succeeded in making Mar totally despiseable (sp?) keep up the good work i wanna know what happens....
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Mopes* Big meanie, how could you have Kael hurt Ava like that? Now I\'m all sad and stuff *throws things* Make it better, fast.

CP the creative
person Zephyr
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m dying! Please update soon! I love this story!!