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I beg thee to review faster. PLease. Pretty please!

*squeal* god that guy is evil o.o poor Ava bless him *glare* Mar better get his comeupance an excruiatingly slow and painful death or castrate him or something. I wanna go save Ava lol!

This was totally worth the wait! I can\'t wait to see the next chapter. Hopefully it\'ll be the confrontation of Mar and Kael. I can\'t wait to see that one. Especially if Mar has Ava completely under his control! Thanks so much for this chapter! I\'ll be waiting on pins and needles for the next one! ;)

I hate Mar. I hate him and I\'m thinking of cruel things I\'d love to do to him right about now. But he\'s your character, so I can\'t touch him...which reminds me, I have a complete sadistic fuck of a char that would be fun to stick around Mar to *ahem* play with the bastard mage. Feel like joining forces for something? Email me if so.

On a more critical note, I feel like this chapter moved entirely too fast. The character\'s thoughts were developed nicely, but the action took too little time and it left me wishing you\'d expanded on it more.

CP the tired.

awesome! loved the way you used demons and creatures of magic. plus, you have just the right amount of plot (you know, enough to keep the interest of your readers, but not so much that you can\'t have room for a little sexual fun now and then ) so, keep up the good work!
KC aka shadow
p.s.
everyone needs some positive encouragement from time to time!! :)

This is wonderful, I am really enjoying this story. Please write more!

Wow! That was such a heart-wrenching rape! Ava, with his \'training\' enjoying it will surely break him! And Kael, when he comes out of the spell or whatever on him from Mar, I can\'t even imagine how he\'ll act! And, my guess, Ava, having the training of being a slave, will HAVE to try to do what his master says, no matter if hes deathly afraid of Kael, right?

Please update soon! I cannot wait until the next chapter is updated and I found out what Kael and Ava\'s emotions are like! Surely Ava will even feel guilty for finding pleasure in such a horrendously painful rape! Poor Ava! (that\'s what the title should be) ;) =)

Very good story! My suggestion? Make the chapters longer! lol I don\'t want this story to end. Perfect amount of slavery angst for me!

Awesome chapter. I don\'t like Mar - he\'s evil!

Wow. I\'m really liking this story. Somehow, I think Ava will forgive Kael, although I don\'t think Kael will forgive himself as easily.
I hope you continue soon.

I love it!! Very nice. xD Lotsa angst too XD
I like Mar. XD I find him funny XD And I like your style of writing! XD SCRY! (likes the word xD)

Do update soon! ^___^V