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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please write more! You are so good at this, and I want Kael to get Ava back so badly. It\'s such a good story, and it\'d be perfect with a happy ending. Sorry, I would say more, but I must go. Keep up the excellent work!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Ave...he is so so drugged and his soul is probelly aware of what is ging on and feels like he is bytraying Zarchast. I love the story hate Mar, he is a good bad guy (that is a contridicktion). well any ways good work.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was deadly sexy! Oh my lord! ::dances:: Wow. lol We have got to get more of that, that is for sure...I cannot wait until Kael starts to attack Mar and Ava realizes that Kael is his true master! I wonder what Ava will do! ::squee::
One, question though? How do you pronounce Kael\'s name? lol I keep pronouncing it three different ways
Just...absolutely beautiful! Bravo, Bravo! ::claps:: lol sorry I just watched \'The Fifth Element\' with \'Ruby Rhod\' lol
One, question though? How do you pronounce Kael\'s name? lol I keep pronouncing it three different ways
Just...absolutely beautiful! Bravo, Bravo! ::claps:: lol sorry I just watched \'The Fifth Element\' with \'Ruby Rhod\' lol
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kill him kael!! kill him good!!
cant wait until the next update!
cant wait until the next update!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I have fallen in love with Ava and Kael!! and Mar is a perfect bad guy. The universe this story is set in is also cool. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven was worth the wait. As always! You\'re looking for inspiration as to what should happen next, huh? Hmmmm...well, Kael needs to get Ava away from Mar somehow. After that...guilt is always fun. Kael for not protecting Ava, Ava for liking what Mar did to him...
Anyway, I liked this chapter. It went a little fast, like you said, but that\'s okay, because I keep wanting to see what happens anyway!
Anyway, I liked this chapter. It went a little fast, like you said, but that\'s okay, because I keep wanting to see what happens anyway!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...intense...as for inspiration...i hope it ends in a kael ava reunion!!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have nothing to complain about this time. That was nice and detailed, explaining the difficulties of the journey Kael was taking. Don\'t just have this end in some overly simplistic one-slice kill, though. When someone (hopefully Mar) dies, have it be at the end of a long, drawn out battle. The wait was well worth it this time *nuzzles*
CP the crazy
CP the crazy
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*poke* You gonna let us see the fight soon? LOL ;)