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Happy late, late birthday! ... Lol

Great chapter1 Omg! That was a horrible place to end it..POOR AVA! I thought for sure he was going to kick some Mage ass...but he\'s so \'cute and cuddly\' that he probably wouldn\'t even hurt a fly...unless, of course, it was hurting his master. ... I loved this chapter...AHH Can\'t wait for chapter 9! ::squee::

I love it...your chapter titles are very humorous...and then the story is angst ridden, it\'s just awesome! Oh man I love it! =)

Can\'t wait for more! ^_^ 5 Star Rating, that\'s for sure!

I\'m reviewing after chapter 5, cause I MUST go take care of duties. I think I\'m feeling like Kael... hot and frustrated.

I love them both - Kael AND Ava are wonderful characters.

Now, I\'m just praying that the saga has an end.

Well done!

awesome.
I love how Mar giggles. It\'s great. He\'s such a fag. ^_^;
I wish this story was made into an anime. that would be hot stuff.

OMG, I love this fic!!! It\'s amazing!!! *spazzes* Totally awesome idea, and quite well done -- go you!!! d(^-^)b I can\'t wait to find out what happens next, not to mention how Kael and Ava get out of this mess...... ^___^ Keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? Oh, and ironically, it just so happens to be a Wednesday...and my birthday...so yeah, happy birthday, whatever Wednesday your\'s was on. ^^ That, and I also happen to have a homicidal hampster -- maybe we can arrange a play date for her and your bunny? (lol) ^___~ Bye!!!

hey, I know Its pretty late but HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! and Great Job on the story. Cant wait for the update. I want to know what happens next!

Hi!
Well, I\'ve never reviewed before, but I\'ll try my best!

First of all: I really hope you are planning a happy end, or... ;-)

At first I was sceptical because of the slave-thingy, but the story got me quite fast.
And I really love Kael ^^
Somehow you managed that I like Mar, although he\'s so evil and mad. hm. strange... But I often love the bad guys, so it isn\'t that strange...

So please keep on writing, I enjoy this very much and PLEASE: something happy and good soon, ok? I just can\'t read anymore sentences how Kael and Ava get hurt. Admittedly I just can\'t keep my eyes off the monitor. *sigh*

One question concerning Mar: Is he really evil? Or just... misunderstood? (you never know ;-) ) There has to be SOME reason why he is the way he is. Or not? Well, I hope... because then there\'s a chance to change ^^

Sooo... that was my first review ever. Don\'t think it was very helpful, but hope you\'ll answer none the less.

Greets, hugs and many good ideas,

Az

Um, Happy late(?) Birthday! ^^;

I\'m sooo glad I found this fic because I like it a lot! Mou, poor Ava ._.; I hope him and Kael get out of there eventually. Damn Mar is such a bastard, but I still can\'t help but like him in some parts ^^; I hope to read the ninth chapter soon!

Ava, come back to us! We miss you!

Wow. Simply great work! :) I am holding my breath till the next chapter! ;)
And happy birthday, though I have no idea what was the date when you uploaded this, sorry

happy birthday!!!! i\'ll gladly beta you. i think this is very, very well-written and you definitely make me feel for the characters.

i assume you\'re using microsoft word? the past tense of slit is slit, so slitted is not a word, but scry is a word, just an arcane one. microsoft word\'s dictionaries are despressingly incomplete when you\'re deling with magickal terminology.

also: a beta proofreads spelling and grammar and cometimes give suggestions on wording or the plot or characterization. example: \"i don\'t think this character would say this. it just doesn\'t seem like the character. if you reworded it this way, it would sound much better for the character.\"