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for Ava

by Aphrael

person Mourning Starz
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You weren't kidding when you spoke of long updates. I don't know how or what your crisises are now, since it's been a hell of a long time since you've updated, but whatever the means, I hope you do update soon. I do actually like these stories (seeming I don't read much in Slash). Anyway, hopefully your muse will drag you back to writing this story cuz that was one hell of a cliff you left us hangin on. Good luck with whatever. Cya (or not)
person Suzie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I really like Ava and Kael...great characters. I'm so excited to see what happens next. How are they going to escape? I like how Ava's and Kael's bond pulled Ava to him.
person pinky
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!! PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON!!!! OMG I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! poor ava :( i hate mar!!! THAT LITTLE WHORE!!! kael : ( hes hurt!! oh-no!! he has to save his beloved ava!!
person jordan
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries*
yiu meanie
happy belated birthday
I WANT MORE
person Nefertari
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont stop, please write more. I luv your story, its one of the best storys i´ve ever read.
Please write another chapter *beg*

Yours Nef
person Lioncourt
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you stop there! Give me more damn it!
person Danyell
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
currently waiting for next chapter..
person aly
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont even know why I\'m reviewing! You know your story is awesome! but hey, if you got it, flaunt it. i only wish i had the natural talent to write as well as you do! but....! im taking mental notes of the writing habits you have and comparing them to my own. your writing style is helping me alot! thanks! yep, now i guess you think im weird... owell, great story!@##%!%&^&$#@!!!!!!
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read it all it so cool i like it what will happen now? o.o you left a cliff hanger for me. hehehe anyway Happy Birthday t you soon. or did it already pass?
person Kathy
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say I antisipated for the next chapter and I loved reading this title.