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for Ava

by Aphrael

person Kaze
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOre please!! Don't leave it hanging there!!
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are such an excellent writer! I adore your easily flowing style and your vocabulary. Too many times have I come across a good concept only to be met with poor grammer and badly constructed sentences. @__@;; I'm DYING to know what happens next! I know you've updated recently, but would it hurt to beg for the next chapter?? hehe
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!
person CrystalTheron
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So as a first time reader of the series I wasn't able to stop. I had intended to read the first chapter and go to bed but I kept reading and now am eager to read more. I would love to see more and see the villian be shread to pieces. The character creation is wonderful and it is fun to see into other's minds and perspectives (POV) so I'm glad to say I realy realy liked this story.


WRITE MORE!
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person Saminada
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Please MORE!!!! >__<
I want to know how he'll save Ava! and if he'll ever kill Mare!
I really liked this update! and I can't wait for more! ^^
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'LL HELP!
person ^^
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this a long time ago...and then seeing it again awhile back and i remember there being more to it...another chapter perhaps??

Still like it though, and i was always curious about how they get rid of Mar.
person Shaznay
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories, so I'm so glad you're bringing it back. And your editing too, which gives me a reason to read it all over again. ;-)
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update?
person mint_leaves
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i really love this story and i hope you update it soon <3!

i also hope you cheer up soon :D