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schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed it very much.. i hope u do continue. please update soon. this story is very unique!
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD! That was so amazing. I can\'t believe it. I am so impressed. I am so incredibly wet right now. I must go do something about it as soon as I read the next chapter. Please post more. I\'ll help with the brainstorming of other characters or ideas if you need it. ! Thanks. One comment though. When I first started it, I really thought that these were Black Slaves, like in the south. Look at it again...it gives that idea. Obviously you find out its not, but the begining is misleading.
Great work. Keep going!
Great work. Keep going!
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are definitly off to a good start. I\'d be curious to see where the story goes from here.
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this is sooo good... thank you, please keep writing!!!
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD! IF you dont write a new chapter and post I might die. I really will. Omigod. What happens when he goes back with him? Is he nice? Is he sadistic? Does he take off the ring thing? I have to know. Please update. I give this 11/10! Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liz
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please? Sorry, but this has totally sucked me in and Ava is becoming one of my favorite characters as well as stories. I\'ll probably review every chapter...unless I just feel hella lazy.
CP the hyper
CP the hyper
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Update soon!
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow- HOT. Really good- the concepts of permanent virginity/vulnerability, they\'re described in a very exciting way. I like the attention to detail. I\'m eager to read more.
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. PLease do continue to write more.
schedule
February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was neat. Write more, please. The world this is set in really catches my fancy and I\'d like to learn more about it. Ava seems like a cool character. The sex scene was pretty good, but that really wasn\'t my mind\'s focus in this chapter.
CP the fascinated
CP the fascinated