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for Ava

by Aphrael

person arienchan
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! More please!
person Fate
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Nice and smutty! Contuine!!!
person James Nero
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be anymore?
person PerfectOblivion3
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So many interrupted sex scenes!>< This was an awesome chapter and yes i love Kael! he seems so sexy with his wings!^^ Well if you have AIM or something could you maybe IM me at cryingwalrus61?>> << it would be very cool if we were friends^^ well this is a great story! PLEASE UPDATE THIS WEEKEND AND NOT TEN YEARS FROM NOW!
person Jaz
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story please up date soon oh and please make Ava master be nice please.
person PerfectOblivion3
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow......pretty amazing so far! One of the best I\'ve read on this site for sure! ^^ please write more soon!
person Anita
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I like it :) Keep writing.
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot. Update soon!
person Caz
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"So do you still want more?\" YES YES YES!
person yaoilover17
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo, it\'s really kool!! i\'d love for you to continue!! the characters are interesting, i like the demon dude, and ava! ^.^ i\'ll reveiw again for the next chapter, so til\' then! bye bye