rate_review Reviews

Oh! It\'s you!!! I didn\'t even look at the author name when I read this fic, then, because I liked it, when I went to bookmark it, I happened to see your name... :D So I thought I\'d break my \'no reviewing at AFFN\' policy and wave. I -so- do adore slave-fic. In response to your questions: Yes... I like Kael. I\'m a bit puzzled by him. (If I\'m remembering correctly...) He\'s a warrior and not entirely human? ... Bred, somehow, for fighting? How is it that he has such status and fame (and money)? Why would he purchase a slave? Why now / Why not earlier? Why does he seem to be on the pampering side of the master spectrum? Although... from a smut-perspective..... if he\'s going to be -too- pampering, the sex scenes tend to be boring (at least for me, when I\'m in smut-cruising mode). As it stands now... Kael doesn\'t seem far from freeing Ava and going, \"Oh, be my lover and my love forever and always!\" (Replete with flowers and butterflies.) And I think if that happened, I\'d loose interest. If, however, Kael were to return from his little battlefield and act completely differently towards Ava (harsher, darker) ... then I think I would be more curious about him and the duality and the story in general.

OMG... amazing!!! it\';s soooooo good!!! i need mooooooooooore! give me mooooooooore!!!!

That was a great start.
As much as I\'m anticipating the sex, I\'d also like to know more about the world you\'ve created. It seems like you can do a lot in terms of plot with Kael\'s character and the fact he\'s a commander of a large army.
I hope you continue.

I\'m likin\' this so far! Don\'t sweat too much about updates; life happens. Just don\'t do anything like me and forget about one story to start another! Thanks to my variation of ADD, I haven\'t updated in months! *blush*

But yeah and stuff! Keep writing. I wanna see how Ava and Kael play out. Mmm...young catboy slave...demon masters...ah yeah, the stuff dreams are made of. XD

I love Kael too!!! he\'s really kool, but so is Ava! and people who like your story should realize or they already know, you do have a life , it is your story and you can take as long as you want to post another chapter, it\'s all up to you. Anyways, I\'ll revwie again next chapter you post, til\' then. bye-bye ^-^ ^.^

Very good chapter. I liked it a lot. I like Kael, he\'s sweet =)
More soon?

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE your story! your a aposlutly terific writer.(Perfict mix of smut and plot!) I\'ll keep checking for an update, so please write another chapter. *puppy dog eyes* PLEASE!?!

i do like him... i hope u do update soon..i can live with monday..just not ten years!

Kael rocks, and I love this fic a LOT. You update faster than a lot of people do, which means that I can get my dose of goodness without too long of a delay. *Is reminded that she\'s waited at least a month since writing last and hits herself* Well, keep up the good work.

CP the chocoholic

this is an interesting story and i would like to see how it progresses. So keep writing.