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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hiya i\'ve never reviewed anything before so i dont know what i\'m supposed to say but i just read your Ava fiction and it was amazing, its the best original fiction i\'ve ever read ( i usually go for fanfics). its really absorbing and atmospheric. I really enjoyed it.....wheres the rest :p
sorry if this is a rubbish review and a waste of your time but i just had to let you know how good it is!
sorry if this is a rubbish review and a waste of your time but i just had to let you know how good it is!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.....my.....Poor Kael! His past coming back to haunt him like that! BAD MAR! BAD! But wow great chapter! Update soon!=D
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH this is an interesting twist. Very well written. Definitely waiting for the next part.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait till the next chappy!! can\'t wait for ava and kael to be together!!!!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could write the next chapter now, if you want! I won\'t mind! The wait is driving me crazy! I love this story! Ava is so cute and innocent, despite what he is. Update as often as possible! I\'ll give you a cookie if you do!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter... I don\'t like Mar! More soon?
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
None of us can tell where the muses want us to take things, but I was kinda expecting this to take a darker twist...fics can\'t be all happy all the time, after all. I\'m still loving this and I don\'t care how long it takes you to update because I\'m sure it\'ll be worth the wait.
CP the miserable
CP the miserable
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable story so far! It is well written in my opinion. Looking forward to the next update
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading Ava. I was quite surprised by it, to tell you the truth. Most of these stories are just pure smut. Ava had a storyline, though. A very good storyline. I really liked it. I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... this sroey is amazing. I love it, really, and Kael... WOW... beautiful... I mean... HOLY SHIT! He\'s awesome.
Please continue this.
Please continue this.