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for Captured: The Sheik's Bride

by BelieveInMe

person Larissa
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IM SO HAPPY YOU ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I\'ve been dying! lol...very good...short but good nonetheless...I enjoyed it. I can\'t wait to see what the family has to say now that he\'s found her!
<3
person Angelita
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m crossing my fingers, my arms, me legs, my eyes, what ever may work for you to update ASAP!! Gotta leave it at a cliff hanger didn\'t you?? Argh, now I must wait...great stuff keep it up!
person lady mudlark
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent new chapter. glad to see a new one after all this time - i\'ve been curious about what\'ll happen! of course, now i\'m even more curious.
great depiction of her coming to grips with her feelings, being all mentally in two worlds. and now the limo and kahdeem! and the fall! i hope she\'s ok... keep up the good work. :)
person wiggly
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. My, you have an excellent story so far. The love scenes are so sensual and so meaningful. I think your descriptions are wonderful and gives insight, although I would like to see more. I would like to know more about them on a more personal level, besides all the love making. Again, wonderful job and I hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it .. update soon please




person Prophetess
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I\'m very much interested on finding out what happens next. Love your writing style. Update soon, pleae. ~Prophetess
person lyndi
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. Please continue to update it.
person Crecy
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Really Realy Realy like this story. ^_^ Now I wish my Prince Charming (Perferably not in frog form) to sweep me off my feet. *grins* PLEASE update soon!
person Starbug
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story, and I look forward to reading more, hopefully soon.

I’d bet good money that Leanna is pregnant already, and that all hell is going to brake lose the moment Khadeem arrives (I assume that as he had her passport at some point, he was able to work out where she lived in New Jersey).

Looking good all round.
person ducks
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just thought i\'d let you know that i\'ve really been enjoying the story. hope to see more chapters soon!